Thursday, October 29, 2009

Quote from Paper

I definalty need help with integrating quotes and how to build up to a quote. If anyone has anytips on how to do it, let me know!

After viewing many horror movies and seeing the same innocent looking, dumb blonde girl getting killed by the monsters, Whedon came up with the idea for Buffy. He states,“It was pretty much the blonde girl in the alley in the horror movie who keeps getting killed...I felt bad for her, but she was always much more interesting to me than other women. She was fun, she had sex, she was vivacious. But then she would get punished for it.” It was this thought that sparked Joss Whedon’s mind and gave him the idea to create something different. He turned the good-looking and blonde cheerleader, who seemed innocent, into a killing machine known as Buffy the Vampire Slayer.

3 comments:

  1. Make sure to put in a parethetical citation with that info then :)

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  2. I think this is good integration so far--but you don't really talk about what seems to be his main point--the punishment. Does that play into your argument at all? If not, you might want to end the quote before that part (so you don't unnecessarily clutter your argument).

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